Friday, May 29, 2009

DE Chapter 2

It’s consuming isn’t? I, [*****] can grant it all to you, in return, I only ask for you to find the “rest”

Huh?

….it seems that you cannot confine yourself yet…I will, meanwhile, lie in the shadow which will always nestle upon you. Till your mind stops wavering.
  • He wakes up with a jolt. “It” talked to him again in his dreams. Jericho tried to go back to sleep, but it was impossible. So he got out of bed and went into the cold streets.
  • Newspapers flew around everywhere. He manages to catch one of the pages but as soon as he saw its headline, he immediately threw it away again. On the headlines, it wrote:

“Explosion at the Men’hir Mines”

  • -Flashback- [a few days ago]

When his vision began to straighten out, the 1st thing he saw was the dead bodies of that gang. He knows that he’s gonna get arrested if he was found out. So he took explosive and flammable items (alcohol) nearby. And KaBOOm!! the mine explodes. In the chaos, he managed sneak out.

  • Over at the autopsy room in a hospital. A doctor made a discovery (and he gasped)

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  • Jericho retired to his home after failing to look for another job. But when he opened the door, the room was completely empty. His bed, possessions etc. all gone.“That bastard” he cursed and he stormed out.
  • Over at police station…the police (already discovered the accident was actually a cover-up for the murders) had narrowed down the suspects

"Jericho...We’ll have you soon. Very soon"

  • The landlord and Jericho quarreled and Jericho atked him but he was blocked and countered by his landlord's bodyguard (and once again he gets pin down). His landlord then 'lectures' him but suddenly stopped when he saw the fragment in Jericho’s shirt pocket.
    he picks up the fragments and then...Jericho snapped
  • ------change scenes----

BAM!!

The door went down and the police storm in Jericho’s room (but it was empty..of course)

Inspector: “what the—“

------change scenes again-------

  • “This is why I hate aristocrats. They only think of their own profits. ‘Glad to have a place to live in’?!! Don’t @#$% with me! You corrupted $#!t!!” (Jericho tramples on the landlord [the bodyguard got pwned edi])
  • Then suddenly, the police storms in

“JERICHO!! You are arrested for the murders of your fellow colleagues, arson and assaulting a civilian!!”

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yay chapter 2! feel free to ask any questions or edit any parts~~~~~~~~~

4 comments:

  1. hahaha BAM! loving de story.. but i dun understand de ending o.. so he ran away.. the police couldn't find jericho at 1st? the landlord is hiding jericho is it?

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  2. that u hav to wait for chapter 3
    buahahahaha >=D

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  3. owh err sry. i salah faham-ed lol
    at 1st the police ingat he went home but jericho edi left to his landlord's place utk ambil his properties back (the landlord ambil his barang bcus belum pay rent)

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  4. hahahaha! belum bayar rent.. ooo i understand now liao.. hahaha

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