DE Chapter 4

it's been awhile but chapta 4~~~
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"Zayne! what's with you?"
"We fought Krobis to make this world into a better place, but can't you see it was a mistake?? Can't you see how corrupted this world became after we defeated him??"
"Surely the people would change"
"That can't do"
"Please! Don't make us do this"
"What do I care?"
"Zayne!!"


“Wake up!” the lady called out
Jericho was woken up with such suddenness he nearly fell off his chair.
“We’re closing up” the lady continued
At 1st Jericho was surprised to find himself in a bar of an unfamiliar town. Then earlier happenings (of chap. 3) came back to him.

Jericho tried to recall his dream but could only recall the word 'Zayne'. He thought there was some familiarity to it but he couldn't just quite remember.

As he walked through the alleys, he noticed everyone kept staring at him. That’s when he realized he was still in the guard’s uniform. Panicked, Jericho quickly moved away from the people’s view and accidently bumped into an old drunken man.
“GO AWAY! I’VE DONE NOTHING WRONG!!” the old man suddenly cried.
While the old drunk was yapping away, Jericho eyed at old man’s overcoat. Though ragged, it was otherwise fine.
“Give me your coat” Jericho demanded
“Huh??!!” said the old baffled man, “Just coz you’re the dog of the military doesn’t mean you can do whatever you like!”
Jericho pulled off his overcoat(uniform) and offered it to the old man in return for the ragamuffin coat on his back. Although still baffled, the old drunk happily complies.

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Morning ☼
“Zayne, Zayne ,Zayne...where have I heard of it?” Jericho murmured
As annoying as it is, that word kept repeating in Jericho’s mind. Then a young boy overheard him.
“Zayne?? You mean the baddie in that ‘dawn eclipse’ story?” said the young boy
"...of course!" Jericho exclaimed
--change scene >> library--

[Jericho explains the dawn eclipse’s story (DE prologue) as he looks @ some books concerning the Dawn Eclipse legend]
“However, the dream I had was slightly different” Jericho added as he closed the book (and when he was finish w/ the story)

“THERE! THAT’S THE GUY WHO GAVE ME THAT COAT!” someone shouted.
It’s the old drunk from the previous night. He had sold him out.
Jericho runs away (w/ the book still in hand) into the forest of book/bookshelves and polices quickly ran after him
And then…umm…http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/uu311/tomyamcat/IMAGE0028copy.jpg
when the police paused @ the (*), Jericho pushes the bookshelf over (and fell on the officers) and he escapes through the emergency exit (he ran up)

He reached the rooftop but only to find that he was surrounded (by more policemen). W/out hesitation,he ran and jumped off the rooftop and catches the outreaching tree branch but FAILED. the tree branch broke and he fell onto the earth.

Jericho quickly got up but he was too late. Some policemen were already rushing towards him.
He hauled the book (which he was still holding) at the officers and beat them up and ran again b4 reinforcements comes. One of the beaten up, semi-conscious officers then shoots Jericho's leg. But even so, Jericho still kept going.

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Ilisa was driving a chariot (pulled by a kerbau/buffalo)and clucking happily to her fav tune, the 'Ode to joy', on her red ipod nano when Jericho comes out of the bushes and trips and falls upon reaching the road...and then gets run over by Ilisa (by accident)
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and there u have it~ as usual, feel free to ask any questions or edit any parts~~~
*the different font colors (in the begining) represents different guardian of fragments
Zayne = Orange
Tharali = Blue
Griff = Green
Kaemus = Brown
Elisja = Yellow
oh and btw, this is the uniform http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/uu311/tomyamcat/IMAGE0029.jpg
feel free to edit that too =)

DE Chapter 3

• When the police stormed in, he tried to get away but it was futile (he got captured)
  
• At the main entrance of prison, Jericho (already changed into prison uniform) handed his clothings and belongings to the officer-in-charge. He (the officer) saw the fragment and jokingly said to Jericho: “If you give me that gem of yours, I might consider on releasing you”
  Those words angered him and Jericho lunged at officer’s throat. Other officers immediately ran in and pull him off
  
• “Hope you rot in here” The officer said as he threw Jericho in his cell.

“Hmph. Serves you right for picking on us” his cellmate said
“Who the hell are you?” Jericho asked
“You’re not Salem…?”
Jericho gave him a confused glare
“…nevermind” the man said

• As it turns out, Salem was a prison guard in charged of the sector that Jericho’s in and he looked similar to Jericho.
  
• A few days later somethingsomething happened (lol, hlp me w/ this) which caused Jericho’s cellmate to become very angry at the security guard
  
• He took out his anger out on Jericho in a psycho way.(lets say it's partially Jericho's fault for accidently provoking the already mad man)
  
• While holding him off, Jericho recalled the fragment’s words: “Let me to grant you the strength to corrupt the boredom of this world.” And he though “If it changes this greedy earth, then give me”
  
• Inevitably, Jericho strangled him to death (w/ some cloth eg. blanket, shirt etc)
  
• Jericho had an idea. He tied the cloth into a noose and tied to the lamp/light bulb. He then hangs the dead man by the neck. Next, he waits for Salem to make his rounds. When Salem finally came into range of view, Jericho called for help. Jericho pretend to try to save the already dead man, Salem unlocks the door and came into the cell in panic. Jericho seizes his chance and knocks Salem unconscious. He then quickly exchanges clothes with him before the other guards came. And then, in the chaos, Jericho made his escape.
  
• "Wait…is this Salem?!”

The officers realized the person that was laying on the prison floor wasn't Jericho but in fact Salem. But it was too late. Jericho had already left the prison ground with his fragment

And so the chase begins…

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and there you have it~ anyways...shud i kill Salem off or not?

• if Salem survives > Jericho will have a personal enemy that looks like him =P
• if he died >...nothing really...maybe the police will kejar him even harder?

and again, feel free to ask any questions or edit any parts~~~~~~~~~

DE Chapter 2

It’s consuming isn’t? I, [*****] can grant it all to you, in return, I only ask for you to find the “rest”

Huh?

….it seems that you cannot confine yourself yet…I will, meanwhile, lie in the shadow which will always nestle upon you. Till your mind stops wavering.

• He wakes up with a jolt. “It” talked to him again in his dreams. Jericho tried to go back to sleep, but it was impossible. So he got out of bed and went into the cold streets.
  
• Newspapers flew around everywhere. He manages to catch one of the pages but as soon as he saw its headline, he immediately threw it away again. On the headlines, it wrote:

“Explosion at the Men’hir Mines”

• -Flashback- [a few days ago]

When his vision began to straighten out, the 1st thing he saw was the dead bodies of that gang. He knows that he’s gonna get arrested if he was found out. So he took explosive and flammable items (alcohol) nearby. And KaBOOm!! the mine explodes. In the chaos, he managed sneak out.

• Over at the autopsy room in a hospital. A doctor made a discovery (and he gasped)

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• Jericho retired to his home after failing to look for another job. But when he opened the door, the room was completely empty. His bed, possessions etc. all gone.“That bastard” he cursed and he stormed out.
• Over at police station…the police (already discovered the accident was actually a cover-up for the murders) had narrowed down the suspects

"Jericho...We’ll have you soon. Very soon"

• The landlord and Jericho quarreled and Jericho atked him but he was blocked and countered by his landlord's bodyguard (and once again he gets pin down). His landlord then 'lectures' him but suddenly stopped when he saw the fragment in Jericho’s shirt pocket.
  he picks up the fragments and then...Jericho snapped
• ------change scenes----

BAM!!

The door went down and the police storm in Jericho’s room (but it was empty..of course)

Inspector: “what the—“

------change scenes again-------

• “This is why I hate aristocrats. They only think of their own profits. ‘Glad to have a place to live in’?!! Don’t @#$% with me! You corrupted $#!t!!” (Jericho tramples on the landlord [the bodyguard got pwned edi])
  
• Then suddenly, the police storms in

“JERICHO!! You are arrested for the murders of your fellow colleagues, arson and assaulting a civilian!!”

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yay chapter 2! feel free to ask any questions or edit any parts~~~~~~~~~

DE Chapter 1 -ver.2-

Yosh! let the man be a miner then~ blood diamonds muahahahahahahah
Anyways, Chapter 1 again!!!

• Jericho one day goes out mining
• during breaktime jericho continued to work (bcus no money to buy food)
• found Zayne's Fragment and picked it up then the fragment pursues him (through telekinesis), what it said to him goes something like this:

"I see that you are frail. A listless lust for power consumes you. Why not get embraced by the arms of the forbidden? My name is [*****]. Let me to grant you the strength to corrupt the boredom of this world. In return I only ask for-----"

• before it can finish it sentence, Jericho got interrupted [someone insist him to take a break (or somthing like tht)]and drops the fragment
• he retrieve it again later but the fragment stop communicating w/ him so he dismissed what happened earlier
• a group of somebody comes up to him, saw it (the fragment) , demands him to pay 'protection fee' and took it away from him. Jericho felt helpless (he was pinned down), his hatred started to stir, the fragment then says to him: "Go ahead, choose..."
• with the power of the fragment he tears them up OR he gets partially-possessed by the fragment--either way, his memory is gonna be blurry in the following chap ^^

I want ur ideas!!

lol, as the title says it, i need some ideas to hlp me expand the DE storyline.
annoying kelefe(s), obstacles along the roads or watever, anything's fine


Anyways, good news! chapter 2 is currently under construction =D However, Bad news is....it's been in construction for more a month alrdy...lol alot of halangan...BUT I will not give up!! I will overcome 'em!!! *ties bandanna w/ the words "gambatte" over forehead*

The Fragments 1.0b and Guardian

Its been a while.. So kesian la..
Quite dead since i'm in exam huh..
Anyway.. I done wif the fragments..

Click Here to View the Fragment

Then since no one drawn the guardian..
Introduction the Cursed Rock Guardian..
He was a hero and noe the fragment's power..
A titan warrior the unstoppable tank..
Swear to protect it from any evil hands..
Even when he died.. His soul combine wif the rocks..
He uses his weight to move around quickly..
Destroying anything in the way..
But he can't turn his head.. and once he charge..
There's no stopping him..

Click to View the Cursed Rock

The creation is roughly..
If really want this guardian..
Then me or u guys make it nice..
Keeping the blog alive.. =D

Embrace your dreams

The Fragments

It's been a while..
Haha.. *Smiley Face*
Been so busy lately..
Mostly on de Video..
Coz de submit date is so so near!
Anyway...
Here are the Fragments..

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Did I miss anything?
Please tell me if i did or wad need 2 change.
Feel free to edit it

Embrace ur Dreams!

My fanart for Ray-sama's Jericho (or is his name still jericho o_O)

Does he look like some other character out there?



Lotsa lovely critiques appreciated. BG sucks. I hate it but I don't wanna work on it anymore.

Edit: The bg was layered using textures. Textures from cgtextures.com. Kudos to the people there and pose was referenced too. Just to say that i'm not a genius or anything. =]

To my lovely co-artists', here is a very good way in designing your characters to give them more depth and to understand them better. The 100 Most Important Things To Know About Your Character

DE Q&A

i would over-fill the chatbox if i were to all the questions so:

For Chaos

Jericho couldn't summon till he got the gauntlet. He'll obtain the gauntlet when

> he defeats the guardian

OR

> he finds it in the temple along w/ Tharali's fragment (still working on story line haha)

FYI as the description of the fragment implied earlier, it'll grant its individual strengths along w/ the unlocks. So Jericho masih dpt xtra strength eventhough he cant summon.

as for the guardians, it's the heroes from the prologue. Or more specifically, their spirits (zombies!!!!)

For LTP

Karhe > black hair w/ aqua highlight, silver eyes, the shirt would b whitish-grey, and the shoes....ur choice

umm just refer here

Felka > orange hair, green eyes, collar...red (i think), same goes for the straps around the wrist,

t-shirt : white; zip & the line that crosses the zip = blue or purple,

shorts = jeans type (blue lor)

and shoes: the lace is red but the rest....ur choice

here's a more detail design of her shoe
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oh, a slight edit on Jericho

the cross pattern and the buckle(on his thigh) throw away lah...let him wear normal pants haha (if u wanna keep it, it's fine too)

Dawn Eclipse chapter 1?

dunno how many time I've turn & edit the story in my head so im just gonna give chapter 1 roughly in point form since writing in novel form is a pain in the ass...

• Jericho one day goes out to sea early in the morning to go pearl-fishing
• on the seabed, he found Zayne's Fragment and picked it up then the fragment like...pursues him (through telekinesis), what it said to him goes something like this:

"I see that you are frail. A listless lust for power consumes you. Why not get embraced by the arms of the forbidden? My name is [*****]. Let me grant you the strength to corrupt the boredom of this world. In return I only ask for-----"

• before it can finish it sentence, Jericho got interrupted (and drops the fragment)
• after he retrieve it again, the fragment stop communicating w/ him so he dismissed what happened earlier
• a group of somebody saw it and took it away from him & shows it off. Jericho felt helpless (he was pinned down), his hatred started to stir, the fragment then says to him: "Go ahead, choose..."
• (with the power of the fragment) he tears them up.

"the long forgotten feelings of vengence was invoked"

so anyways, there you have it :) edit it as u wish~hahahaahhaha

btw, i've also consider him to be a coal miner (or any jobs tht consists of extractings, low pay, and bad conditions) but finally choose pearl-fisher bcus....if u commit a murder (or in Jericho's case, murders) and u're at the sea, you can just say that nature took 'em..unless of course, someone saw u...

but honestly im still debating whether he should be a pearl-fisher or a coal miner...advices, anyone?

Take a break...Not! more ideas for DE

...b4 i continue

• Jericho collects the fragments > when the last piece is collected, the evil emperor is revived
• Each fragment have its own individual power

Zayne's Fragment = Strength [Encavhine unlock]

Tharali's Fragment = Wisdom [allows summoning (or magic too)/obtains the Eclipse Gauntlet]

Kaemus' Fragment = Endurance [obtains the Axe of Neverise(from fighting the seal guardian)/Brutagan unlock]

Griff's Fragment = Dexterity(?) [Nuhtrac unlock]

Elisja's Fragment = Diligence [emperor's revival]

• The evil emperor's name would be "Krobis"(thou i dun think his name is important but just in case)
• The betrayer comes in (sometime) after Griff's Fragment is obtained

and one request : can someone design the fragments? (along w/ its complete form)

Anyways feel free to ask any questions or edit any parts~~~

Dawn Eclipse Prologue

‘Once upon a time, there was an evil emperor who ruled the lands. The emperor detested the Light and with the power of Darkness, blocked every source of light, including the sun. People called it the Dawn Eclipse era as there was neither a glimmer of light nor hope for the people who lived in constant fear and despair. Until one day, 5 travelling heroes made an alliance in order to rid the emperor. Griff, Zayne, Tharali, Elisja & Kaemus were their names.
Day after day, the heroes frantically fought their way through the castle. Finally, with the will and determination of the five, the evil emperor had been slain. His powers sealed away and separated into fragments. The heroes each protected a fragment so that if the evil emperor were to be resurrected, such power would not fall into the wrong hands.
After the event, peace and light have been restored to the lands and the party was disbanded. However it was not all it seems. For one day, Zayne, fell into greed and used its power for his own biddings. Chaos had spread once more into the world. The remaining four joined hands once more to take down the corrupted man.
Together, the four easily obtained the upper hand of their fight against Zayne. But before the last blow was dealt, Zayne somehow manage to escape with his life. What happen from then on was anyone’s guess. Some say he eventually received heavenly punishment. Others say the darkness consumed him…’

This legend was told and retold to generations after generations. However, it wasn’t just a legend…

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Chapter 1 is underway!! pls look forward to it ^^ (but not too much..hehe /swt)

Ilisa

Name: Ilisa
Age: 21
Occupation: Farmer
Likes: Farming, eating, crapping, dreams of conquering the world, ipod nano (red), jacuzzi
Dislikes: Cows (prefers buffalo), long hair, fancy clothes, coke.
Preferred songs: Chickens clucking 'Ode to joy' (chickens are trained to do so)
Weapon(s) of choice: Parang and Rake

Picture:


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P/s: Kyo, you can start putting her into your story. Her characteristics can be written anyhow based on the stuff up there. She's prolly the bad guy. Lol.

The Minions

Finally I'm done wif the minions..
I hope u ladies will like it..
Its a rough work..
I tried my best to make it as tidy as possible..
So easier for u gals to see..

They are called "The Esplice"
They can be summon and unsummon..
They eat any souls as breakfast!
Their mouth are sidewayz..
And they can talk human language!

The warrior is called Encavhine
It is fast and moderate strong...
It is well balance wif sword and shield..
Click Here to View Encavhine

The defender is called Brutagan
It is not fast but very strong (slow attack speed)
It is the best defender among all..
Mostly is used for blocking attacks.. Even magic..
Right hand is for grabbing only..
Click Here to View Brutagan

The archer is called Nuhtrac
It is very fast but not strong..
It has very long sight...
And able to shoot down enemies from afar..
It has only 3 eyes..
Click Here to View Nuhtrac

To see how big they are..
Click here to See It

Hope u all like it..
O yea, feel free to edit it..

Embrace your Dreams..

DE updates

yosh! i've thought of some parts of story for DE~~~ it goes like this--

the reason Jericho (the anti-hero) wants the world for himself: traumatic childhood; keep getting abused, bullied etc. so he wants to get back at them (muahahaha)

Climax

at the peak of his plans, Jericho gets backstab by his own "ally"(or allies), his left arm gets cut off and his gauntlet gets stolen

*later his left arm would be replaced w/ a prosthetic one

so he swears revenge!!! but while taking it back or fighting w/ the betrayer, the gauntlet evolve into a huge mob(boss) so they have no choice but to kill it

........sounds like a vdo game story XD
anyways here are my characters :
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but i havent decide on which side they r on and their ages r....younger thn Jericho?

and some editings on Jericho :
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hope it's ok, Chaos >.<

The Anti Hero

I'm done wif the "hero" of Dawn Eclipse...
The hero should be 24 years old...
Not too young not too old.. Kekeke..
Anyway.. He wans to take control of de world..
Activated some ancient artifact brings de "Eclipse"
Unleashing some special and destructive creature..
Under his control wif tat gauntlet..
But he didnt noe it'll unleash some other things..
Demons, Monsters, Vampire and etc.
(Vampire is coz nite forever!)
So he accidentally save de world
instead of doing pure evil things...

Click to View the Anti-Hero

Juz an idea.. Feel free to edit it..
And also the drawing...
Only Dawners Artist member of course..
Its juz idea for Kyo-san..
Kekekekeke~

Embrace your Dreams..