Dawn Eclipse chapter 1?

dunno how many time I've turn & edit the story in my head so im just gonna give chapter 1 roughly in point form since writing in novel form is a pain in the ass...

• Jericho one day goes out to sea early in the morning to go pearl-fishing
• on the seabed, he found Zayne's Fragment and picked it up then the fragment like...pursues him (through telekinesis), what it said to him goes something like this:

"I see that you are frail. A listless lust for power consumes you. Why not get embraced by the arms of the forbidden? My name is [*****]. Let me grant you the strength to corrupt the boredom of this world. In return I only ask for-----"

• before it can finish it sentence, Jericho got interrupted (and drops the fragment)
• after he retrieve it again, the fragment stop communicating w/ him so he dismissed what happened earlier
• a group of somebody saw it and took it away from him & shows it off. Jericho felt helpless (he was pinned down), his hatred started to stir, the fragment then says to him: "Go ahead, choose..."
• (with the power of the fragment) he tears them up.

"the long forgotten feelings of vengence was invoked"

so anyways, there you have it :) edit it as u wish~hahahaahhaha

btw, i've also consider him to be a coal miner (or any jobs tht consists of extractings, low pay, and bad conditions) but finally choose pearl-fisher bcus....if u commit a murder (or in Jericho's case, murders) and u're at the sea, you can just say that nature took 'em..unless of course, someone saw u...

but honestly im still debating whether he should be a pearl-fisher or a coal miner...advices, anyone?