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Thursday, August 20, 2009
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hope u can c thru my messy colored sketch. Anyways, chap 5 (left to right)
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Tuesday, August 4, 2009
DE Chapter 4
it's been awhile but chapta 4~~~
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"Zayne! what's with you?"
"We fought Krobis to make this world into a better place, but can't you see it was a mistake?? Can't you see how corrupted this world became after we defeated him??"
"Surely the people would change"
"That can't do"
"Please! Don't make us do this"
"What do I care?"
"Zayne!!"
“Wake up!” the lady called out
Jericho was woken up with such suddenness he nearly fell off his chair.
“We’re closing up” the lady continued
At 1st Jericho was surprised to find himself in a bar of an unfamiliar town. Then earlier happenings (of chap. 3) came back to him.
Jericho tried to recall his dream but could only recall the word 'Zayne'. He thought there was some familiarity to it but he couldn't just quite remember.
As he walked through the alleys, he noticed everyone kept staring at him. That’s when he realized he was still in the guard’s uniform. Panicked, Jericho quickly moved away from the people’s view and accidently bumped into an old drunken man.
“GO AWAY! I’VE DONE NOTHING WRONG!!” the old man suddenly cried.
While the old drunk was yapping away, Jericho eyed at old man’s overcoat. Though ragged, it was otherwise fine.
“Give me your coat” Jericho demanded
“Huh??!!” said the old baffled man, “Just coz you’re the dog of the military doesn’t mean you can do whatever you like!”
Jericho pulled off his overcoat(uniform) and offered it to the old man in return for the ragamuffin coat on his back. Although still baffled, the old drunk happily complies.
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Morning ☼
“Zayne, Zayne ,Zayne...where have I heard of it?” Jericho murmured
As annoying as it is, that word kept repeating in Jericho’s mind. Then a young boy overheard him.
“Zayne?? You mean the baddie in that ‘dawn eclipse’ story?” said the young boy
"...of course!" Jericho exclaimed
--change scene >> library--
[Jericho explains the dawn eclipse’s story (DE prologue) as he looks @ some books concerning the Dawn Eclipse legend]
“However, the dream I had was slightly different” Jericho added as he closed the book (and when he was finish w/ the story)
“THERE! THAT’S THE GUY WHO GAVE ME THAT COAT!” someone shouted.
It’s the old drunk from the previous night. He had sold him out.
Jericho runs away (w/ the book still in hand) into the forest of book/bookshelves and polices quickly ran after him
And then…umm…http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/uu311/tomyamcat/IMAGE0028copy.jpg
when the police paused @ the (*), Jericho pushes the bookshelf over (and fell on the officers) and he escapes through the emergency exit (he ran up)
He reached the rooftop but only to find that he was surrounded (by more policemen). W/out hesitation,he ran and jumped off the rooftop and catches the outreaching tree branch but FAILED. the tree branch broke and he fell onto the earth.
Jericho quickly got up but he was too late. Some policemen were already rushing towards him.
He hauled the book (which he was still holding) at the officers and beat them up and ran again b4 reinforcements comes. One of the beaten up, semi-conscious officers then shoots Jericho's leg. But even so, Jericho still kept going.
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Ilisa was driving a chariot (pulled by a kerbau/buffalo)and clucking happily to her fav tune, the 'Ode to joy', on her red ipod nano when Jericho comes out of the bushes and trips and falls upon reaching the road...and then gets run over by Ilisa (by accident)
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and there u have it~ as usual, feel free to ask any questions or edit any parts~~~
*the different font colors (in the begining) represents different guardian of fragments
Zayne = Orange
Tharali = Blue
Griff = Green
Kaemus = Brown
Elisja = Yellow
oh and btw, this is the uniform http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/uu311/tomyamcat/IMAGE0029.jpg
feel free to edit that too =)
_________________________________________________________
"Zayne! what's with you?"
"We fought Krobis to make this world into a better place, but can't you see it was a mistake?? Can't you see how corrupted this world became after we defeated him??"
"Surely the people would change"
"That can't do"
"Please! Don't make us do this"
"What do I care?"
"Zayne!!"
“Wake up!” the lady called out
Jericho was woken up with such suddenness he nearly fell off his chair.
“We’re closing up” the lady continued
At 1st Jericho was surprised to find himself in a bar of an unfamiliar town. Then earlier happenings (of chap. 3) came back to him.
Jericho tried to recall his dream but could only recall the word 'Zayne'. He thought there was some familiarity to it but he couldn't just quite remember.
As he walked through the alleys, he noticed everyone kept staring at him. That’s when he realized he was still in the guard’s uniform. Panicked, Jericho quickly moved away from the people’s view and accidently bumped into an old drunken man.
“GO AWAY! I’VE DONE NOTHING WRONG!!” the old man suddenly cried.
While the old drunk was yapping away, Jericho eyed at old man’s overcoat. Though ragged, it was otherwise fine.
“Give me your coat” Jericho demanded
“Huh??!!” said the old baffled man, “Just coz you’re the dog of the military doesn’t mean you can do whatever you like!”
Jericho pulled off his overcoat(uniform) and offered it to the old man in return for the ragamuffin coat on his back. Although still baffled, the old drunk happily complies.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Morning ☼
“Zayne, Zayne ,Zayne...where have I heard of it?” Jericho murmured
As annoying as it is, that word kept repeating in Jericho’s mind. Then a young boy overheard him.
“Zayne?? You mean the baddie in that ‘dawn eclipse’ story?” said the young boy
"...of course!" Jericho exclaimed
--change scene >> library--
[Jericho explains the dawn eclipse’s story (DE prologue) as he looks @ some books concerning the Dawn Eclipse legend]
“However, the dream I had was slightly different” Jericho added as he closed the book (and when he was finish w/ the story)
“THERE! THAT’S THE GUY WHO GAVE ME THAT COAT!” someone shouted.
It’s the old drunk from the previous night. He had sold him out.
Jericho runs away (w/ the book still in hand) into the forest of book/bookshelves and polices quickly ran after him
And then…umm…http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/uu311/tomyamcat/IMAGE0028copy.jpg
when the police paused @ the (*), Jericho pushes the bookshelf over (and fell on the officers) and he escapes through the emergency exit (he ran up)
He reached the rooftop but only to find that he was surrounded (by more policemen). W/out hesitation,he ran and jumped off the rooftop and catches the outreaching tree branch but FAILED. the tree branch broke and he fell onto the earth.
Jericho quickly got up but he was too late. Some policemen were already rushing towards him.
He hauled the book (which he was still holding) at the officers and beat them up and ran again b4 reinforcements comes. One of the beaten up, semi-conscious officers then shoots Jericho's leg. But even so, Jericho still kept going.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ilisa was driving a chariot (pulled by a kerbau/buffalo)and clucking happily to her fav tune, the 'Ode to joy', on her red ipod nano when Jericho comes out of the bushes and trips and falls upon reaching the road...and then gets run over by Ilisa (by accident)
_________________________________________________________
and there u have it~ as usual, feel free to ask any questions or edit any parts~~~
*the different font colors (in the begining) represents different guardian of fragments
Zayne = Orange
Tharali = Blue
Griff = Green
Kaemus = Brown
Elisja = Yellow
oh and btw, this is the uniform http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/uu311/tomyamcat/IMAGE0029.jpg
feel free to edit that too =)
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